Room 7's poem of the week was called 'The Magic Box' by Kit Wright. Here are some of the children's poems. They contain true and 'magical' thoughts and ideas.
The Magic Box
I will put in my box
silky webs glowing,
and a cheetah going past.
I will put in the box
raw onions,
the crash of lightning,
the smell of ice-cream.
The lid is made out of bubblegum
I will put in my box
the sea rolling in
and a monster chasing me.
The sound of drums booming and banging.
I will keep my magic box under my bed.
By Lily
The Magic Box
I will put in my box
a squeak of a mouse,
a walking bus,
a fluffy cat
and a roar of a lion.
The taste of a juicy apple,
A drop of rain,
the smell of dust,
a feel of soft ice-cream
and a bad dream of falling off a cliff.
Its lid is made out of gold and steel.
Its hinges are made out of pink, green and red eyeballs.
I will keep it up a bubble tree.
By Cassandra
The Mad Box
I will put in my box
the sound of people screaming,
the taste of raw cabbage,
the sight of dinosaurs stomping
and a volcano erupting.
My box is fashioned out of tin and gold.
The lid is made out of moons
and the hinges are made out of garbage.
I will keep my box in a closet locked up.
By Michael
The Misty Box
In my box I will put
a wonderful feeling of being famous,
the lovely fluffy feeling of touching a fluffy cat,
and the sight of the most wonderful birthday presents.
A rainy day, but through the mist, an Otatara team on a pitch.
What a sound a guitar strumming is!
A catchy meow from my cat Penny
and a rotten chicken taste of dog biscuit.
The icy taste of an ice-block.
An ice-cream that each time you eat a piece another piece comes back.
The feeling of an icy cold snowflake landing on my tongue
and the sweet smell of the fresh salt water.
The look of a nocturnal kitten creeping in the night. Scary!
A door that leads to a place unknown,
a land of ice-cream and chocolate with chocolate streams
and the blood colour of red joined with sky blue.
Oh the wonderful magic box has a lid made of jewels.
The hinges are made of sparkly silver foil.
It is wrapped up in pinky, purply satin.
By Brooke
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3 comments:
Congratulations on your fantastic blog! I have really enjoyed reading your poems and goals and seeing how much you have all grown with your learning. Keep up the good work.
Miss Young
wow what wonderfull poems there so cool!!!!!
I love your poems.I really like lilly's one they are really descriptive.I think i will try write one
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